tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post6748716471373040509..comments2023-11-28T22:47:40.465-05:00Comments on Tales from FAR Manor: #TuesdaySerial: On the Wide River #4 (Accidental Sorcerers, Season 3)Larry Kollarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-50616622891441019402012-06-19T07:03:02.768-04:002012-06-19T07:03:02.768-04:00I think John has a point. I think your readers can...I think John has a point. I think your readers can handle the extra layer :)Peter Newmanhttp://www.runpetewrite.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-52225321242847736282012-06-07T08:41:35.628-04:002012-06-07T08:41:35.628-04:00Helen, Katherine, thanks much — I'm glad the c...Helen, Katherine, thanks much — I'm glad the cliffhanger worked. ;-)<br /><br />JohnX, any suggestions on the presentation? There will be some dialog in it next week, and I was trying to avoid those layers (or at least abstract the top layer). Thanks!Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-43366146135656562372012-06-06T15:28:14.775-04:002012-06-06T15:28:14.775-04:00Not 100% sure about the way it's presented, bu...Not 100% sure about the way it's presented, but I really like the 'story within a story' you've got going here. I'm looking forward to both stories continuing next week. =)John Xerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17492709629314280633noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-80255049678783966622012-06-05T12:07:03.333-04:002012-06-05T12:07:03.333-04:00Great back story! And the set-up to it has been ha...Great back story! And the set-up to it has been handled nicely. But yeah, like Helen said, now we poor readers have a cliff-hanger to deal with!Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-72683473700632004022012-06-04T23:20:23.618-04:002012-06-04T23:20:23.618-04:00Oh don't stop there, I want to know what's...Oh don't stop there, I want to know what's next, I do I do! ^_^Helen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.com