tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post6294436704094248637..comments2023-11-28T22:47:40.465-05:00Comments on Tales from FAR Manor: Christmas Guardians 2: The Creepy Elf (#FridayFlash)Larry Kollarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-39922030250010529322012-12-21T14:43:20.753-05:002012-12-21T14:43:20.753-05:00I think Third Guardian will get away with it. I me...I think Third Guardian will get away with it. I mean, that elf was asking for it!Peter Newmanhttp://www.runpetewrite.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-21670762480891238082012-12-17T23:46:57.928-05:002012-12-17T23:46:57.928-05:00Thanks, Katherine. They could always sit on a tabl...Thanks, Katherine. They could always sit on a table… or a shelf.<br /><br />Cindy, some take no prisoners. The Guardians leave no evidence!<br /><br />Thanks, Tim!Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-75051300742481353102012-12-15T12:19:57.491-05:002012-12-15T12:19:57.491-05:00What a fun story. I like these guardians.What a fun story. I like these guardians.Tim VanSant Writeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-76208400462993685592012-12-15T05:52:51.585-05:002012-12-15T05:52:51.585-05:00Ha!Loved this! The tone was perfect. Nasty little ...Ha!Loved this! The tone was perfect. Nasty little thing that elf is! I'll be putting my Guardians on the lookout too.. Cindy Vaskovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06747628778627025130noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-21098002370318980472012-12-14T23:44:44.214-05:002012-12-14T23:44:44.214-05:00I like these guardians! Makes me wish I had a mant...I <i>like</i> these guardians! Makes me wish I had a mantelpiece. Katherine Hajerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08270232675026751342noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-53331183755530111002012-12-14T22:54:09.426-05:002012-12-14T22:54:09.426-05:00Thanks, Marc! When I started taking writing seriou...Thanks, Marc! When I started taking writing seriously, dialogue was the first thing I started trying to improve.<br /><br />Thanks, Patricia—normally I'd root for the elf, but he did nothing but deserve what he got…<br /><br />Tony, the wife tells me we're going to get one when Mason's a little older. I may have to pull a few pranks with/on it…<br /><br />John, that's a good place for them, I'd say!<br /><br />Glad you liked it Sonya! Thanks for the idea…<br /><br />Icy, you know, I could see Will F doing this bad elf!<br /><br />Helen, Third Guardian may not say much, but she's every bit as dangerous as the other two. Under the right conditions, as the elf found out… heehee!Larry Kollarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08317037795075278427noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-13487832355762844102012-12-14T20:49:21.077-05:002012-12-14T20:49:21.077-05:00Oh those elves are nearly as bad as goblins! Still...Oh those elves are nearly as bad as goblins! Still the smarter they are the bigger they fall - with the help of a Guardian of course! Tee - heeHelen A. Howellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12748128819820230841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-21090602878469624882012-12-14T13:52:49.865-05:002012-12-14T13:52:49.865-05:00The whole time I read this, I pictured Will Ferrel...The whole time I read this, I pictured Will Ferrell as the elf!!Icy Sedgwickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-6504821541500177352012-12-14T12:17:38.929-05:002012-12-14T12:17:38.929-05:00I love this! That creepy elf had it coming! :)I love this! That creepy elf had it coming! :)Sonyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01351929216915547602noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-80000124931681552742012-12-14T10:29:46.953-05:002012-12-14T10:29:46.953-05:00Into the waste bin the nightmares go?Into the waste bin the nightmares go?John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-59663159685183995142012-12-14T09:56:27.343-05:002012-12-14T09:56:27.343-05:00Hilarious piece, Larry! I find the Elf on a Shelf ...Hilarious piece, Larry! I find the Elf on a Shelf thing to be pretty creepy myself.Tony Nolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-82288622782263778882012-12-14T08:42:20.528-05:002012-12-14T08:42:20.528-05:00LOL That was cute and funny. I love the seriousnes...LOL That was cute and funny. I love the seriousness of the guardians up against the elf with an attitude.Patricia JLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582005500429122486noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12954391.post-8802751398003177082012-12-14T05:52:02.371-05:002012-12-14T05:52:02.371-05:00You always handle dialogue so well Larry and this ...You always handle dialogue so well Larry and this was no exception! <br /><br />marc nashSulci Collectivehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03293833259808943096noreply@blogger.com